Monday, October 28, 2013

Blog Assignment # 5 - So you want a revolution?

Use the following textbook pages to help with your response, pgs 572 - 577(new)  478 - 484 (old textbook)

Imagine you belong to one of the following groups in 1789 France: nobles, high clergy, parish priests, the bourgeoisie, peasants or city workers. Write a letter to the king at the time (Louis XVI) explaining to him what are the chief problems at the time and offer to him some solutions to those problems.

42 comments:

  1. To Louis XVI,

    The problems that are happening are mainly occurring in economy. Peasants are rioting for food and the nobles are making royal tyranny due to the increasing of taxes. What I think in order to be out of this crisis is to spend some tax money on food and the rest to pay the debt of your predecessor Louis XIV who created deficit spending in the first place for wars. You should also give your people the right to speak because it is good to have many peoples' thoughts especially when there is a major crisis in the city.

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  2. Dear Louis XVI,
    The biggest problem at the time is with economy. The country is deeply in debt due to Louis XIV.We are spending more money that we take in.All the tax that is taken is used to pay that debt. I know that in order to get back on track you need to increase taxes, but you could also decrease your spending. There is now a decrease in food. People are starving not know when they will eat again. People are starting to attack the rich in order to get food. Just because you had a bad harvest I don't think you should have raised food prices.I think that you guys should get back on track by coming up with a way to spend money wisely, and properly. you guys should get organized or else this government will die very fast, along with its people.

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    1. Anisa, I think you did a good job on this because you have stated the problems and gave a well organized solution. I like the part where you have said "Just because you had a bad harvest I don't think you should have raised food prices.I think that you guys should get back on track by coming up with a way to spend money wisely, and properly. you guys should get organized or else this government will die very fast, along with its people." because you specifically addressed the problem.

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  3. Dear Louis XVI,
    It has come to my attention that a detrimental proceeding issue is the state of the economy. Since i am in the 3rd estate as a bourgeoisie i have to try twice as hard to try to reverse the deficit. We have to pay taxes to the 1st estate and its really taking a toll on my life as well as my families. It is so hard just to get by and with this major deficit on your hands its making it much harder. Given all the longterm flaws in the economy due to your errors leads me to believe that you do not care the the 3rd estates well being. The third estate as a whole would all agree to reform as well as some people who belong to the 1st and 2nd estate. I believe that you do not obtain the qualities to be an adequate ruler and for this reason you should expect insurrection from my fellow people because we are finished with your imbecilic tactics. Your methods are impractical as well as absurd and you are not fit to rule. This is the way that the whole 3rd estate feels about your methods which should speak volume to you since the 3rd predominately makes up the whole society that you rule.
    Sincerely,
    an outraged Bourgeoisie

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  4. Dear Louis XVI,

    It is completely unfair that you have made the mistake of spending more money than we take in and now were forced to pay the price with your increase of taxes. Someone of your power should know how to budget money, now thanks to your mistakes we're all suffering more than ever, with not a thought on how others are going to survive. Organization is much needed in a government, something you should learn.

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  5. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am speaking as the voice of the third estate. I think it's completely unfair that we, the peasants and bourgeoisie, who are already struggling with our expenses have to pay higher taxes just to help with deficit spending than the first and second estate. Not to mention that those two estates are covered in wealth and are given everything for free its just unreasonable. The bourgeoisie is the most intelligent group of people who have jobs which are the most essential. I am apart of the bourgeoisie feel that it's degrading that we've worked so hard to get where we are and we are treated as if we don't exist. I think that maybe if you just lowered the taxes for the third estate it wouldn't be so hard to make a living under such high expenses. There needs to be some order in the economy right now it is in complete disarray. It is so hard to care for my own family who I've worked so hard for and now I have to be these ridiculous amount of tax money. As a ruler you should be dong what's best for the people not your own needs. Just because you have the power to arrange our government into demeaning social classes doesn't mean that it's fair.

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  6. Dear Louis XVI,
    What is happening is because of you. You are the cause of this economy issue that we are dealing with... In order to fix our economy it looks like you are going to have to increase our taxes and that hurts us but its for the sake of our economical issues, but if you are going to raise our taxes you are going to have to decrease the amount of money that you are spending.

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  7. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am speaking on behalf of the third estate. We are all people with professions that can benefit the society and the entire nation more than the second estate can. But we are treated as less. We are doctors, professors, skilled artisans, and merchants who all have huge roles in society. We should be considered the second estate and given privileges that we deserve.

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  8. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am speaking on behalf of the first estate. I think the problem with my estate is that we pay no taxes. Even though we do provide some social services you still need our money. To improve the problem you should put fines on people if they do not pay their taxes!

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  9. Dear Louis xvi,

    I am speaking on behalf of the third estate. I am here to tell you that it is completely unfair that peasants such as myself and many others struggle with the expenses of high taxes. In order to improve this problem, I believe that the rich, and the willing should pay higher taxes. this is a lot more fair.

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  10. Dear Louis xvi,
    As a member of the bourgeoisie, I would like to address that it is completely absurd for us peasants to be paying more than we can afford, while those who are in a higher class of wealth are granted complete economic coverage. I suggest you take this into consideration and arrange a logical solution to this issue!

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  11. Dear Louis XVI,

    We are having big problems in the economy. We are going to have to raise taxes in order to get us out of debt. Being in debt can be the worst thing for out country because it makes us look weak and poor to other powerful countries. We want to show those countries we are strong and know what we are doing with our money. But we should also be considerate to the people with taxing certain everyday needs. But if we all work as a country we can get ourselves back on track!

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  12. Dear Louis XVI,

    I am speaking on behalf of the third estate. We are all people with professions that can benefit the society and the entire nation more than the second estate can. We are doctors, professors, skilled artisans, and merchants who all have huge roles in society. We should be considered the second estate and given privileges that we deserve because I feel this is unfair and that since we have this skill that is very useful we should be treated as useful as they are.

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  13. Dear Louis XVI,
    The country is deeply in debt because of your decisions yo keep spending money. All of the tax money that is taken from us is used to pay the debt that you made. We can hardly afford to have food on our tables everyday. You need to learn how to spend our money wisely and carefully. This is so that we can live and grow as a community. We can't live like this much longer.

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  14. Dear Louis XVI,

    This country is in trouble because of you. You've been spending more money than we take in and as a result we are in debt paying increasing taxes. I believe that you of all people should know how to budget. You need to think before you make actions and plan more orderly

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  15. Dear King Louis XIV,
    My name is Vanessa I’m a peasant, I’m am concerned that all my money I work for is going to only pay taxes I don’t think it’s fair that they other people don’t get the pay taxes. It’s not fair that sometimes us peasants can’t bring food to the table especially money for our family. It would be nice if the taxes would be split equally in between all 3 social systems.
    Sincerely, Vanessa

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  16. Dear Louis XVI,
    The fact that the economy is a disaster makes it hard for us to live. Either you raise the taxes, or cut the prices. As a peasant, i can't even afford to keep food on the table. And you make us pay higher taxes? The first estate should pay higher taxes then us. It's unbelievably unfair. You are a terrible ruler.

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  17. Dear Louis XVI,
    The reason why the economy is so bad right now is because of you. You have to raise the taxes or stop spending so much money. You raising taxes on us peasants is going to hurt me so bad because its so hard to make money and get food so that i can eat.

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  18. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am speaking on behalf of the third estate. We don't make much money, and we all have families to feed, and house, and because of you, it's becoming almost impossible to do that. You do realize that you are spending more money than the country has right? We are digging ourselves into an economic hole that who knows how long is going to take for us to repair it. I hope that one day you wake up and realize how unfair, unreasonable, and selfish you are being.

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  19. Dear Louis XVI,

    On behave of me and the rest of the bourgeoisies we would like to show you what is wrong with your social class system. All of the taxes go to the bourgeoisies and the peasants, I know that we are the 98% but nobody should be tax exempt except you. If you don't fix these problems there will soon be a revolutionlead by the poor.

    -The Bourgeoisie

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  20. Dear Louis XVI,
    As a peasant, we are facing a lot of poverty because we don't get paid enough and we also don't have equal freedoms as people of the upper class. I think we should be offered better jobs and have the same rights as all the other citizens, such as having the right to vote.

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    1. I agree with you because i believe peasant should get paid more because their the poorest out of all the classes.

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  21. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am speaking on behalf of the first estate. I am glad and thankful to be part of the 0.5 percent of our population that lives a good life and doesn't have to pay taxes, but i don't think that our community can rely only off of the third estates taxes. Yes they are the most populated estate but i think that if every estate payed taxes every now and then it would be better for our economy.

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  22. Dear Louis XLV,
    I am a peasant in your kingdom. you probably have never seen you but in the third estate we are going hungry we cant make any money to feed our children. We have jobs well some of us do but we barely make enough money to pay off the huge taxes that you put for us, and then there is barely enough money for food. i think that you should make some changes to your kingdom. First of all i think that you should actually tax the first and second estate because i think that you will actually make a lot of money if you did, and you should lower the taxes in the third estate because honestly we have barely enough money to feed our kids and we are basically 90% of the population. and you should actually let us make more money so that we can survive. some of the other people in the third estate are thinking about rebelling against you so i think that you should fix things now before its too late.

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  23. Dear louis XVI,

    I am a peasant going through alot of hardships such as poverty, not getting paid enough, and lack of freedom. I feel like we should have more freedom as people do in the upper class. Getting paid more and having the right to vote.

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  24. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am a peasant who is under your control. Me and the other people of the third estate are going hungry and aren't able to pay for necessities because we have to cater to you.It isn't fair me and the others should be treated differently because I wasn't born wealthy. You have all the money we don't have and you give us the burden to pay the taxes ! We are treated unfairly and it needs to change ! We are done with this and if we have to a rebel is going to happen. Think about it ! We aren't scared anymore !

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  25. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am a peasant going through your a rough time. A lot has been going on such as poverty because as of right now, we all are not being paid as much as we deserve, as well as poverty we aren't having the rights we deserve. I feel besides the money issues, our rights we should be granted are just as important, i feel as well as being paid more we should get the jobs everyone else is granted just like other citizens.

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  26. Dear Louis xvi,
    YOU CALL YOURSELF A KING,YOU ARE A DISGRACE , YOU!!!! have peasants dying of hungry while your on the backside eating wild-boar and lobsters shipped from England . Us the peasants are not being paid well and even have rights we deserve.I feel that you need to stop living this dream and help your people and nation sir .. try to fix the money issue and stop sitting on your backside all day.

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  27. Dear Louis XVI,

    Yes. It's me again and I got a few problems with you. Unfortunately, I'm a peasant under the control of someone that happens to be you. *rolls eyes in disgust* I hope you can see that there's a lot of struggles with your little working system. You see, us peasants aren't being paid well and that's nobody but who's fault? YOURS ! You need to stop being selfish, get off that greedy behind of yours and fix these money issues. Our voices deserve to be heard and our rights deserve to be put into thought HARDLY about & put into action. I may have the appearance of a peasant, but never was I low class thank you very much. So either you get off that lazy, irresponsible, wanna-be royalty behind of yours and fix the money issue or step down. It's obvious you're not king or royal material. Tuh.

    (P.S. Never was I a peasant. I'm THE Prince, just saying *shrugs*)

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  28. Dear Louis XVI,

    As a peasant living under your rule, I feel outraged that you are paying more attention to the other classes and not giving any recognition to the lower classes. Most peasants are dying of hunger right now, and you're just not paying attention to us. We aren't being paid enough money for our work, and you're being quite greedy and obnoxious. I hope there's going to be a lot of changes towards the treatment of peasants or else all peasants will revolt.

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  29. Dear Louis XVI,
    Living as a peasant isn't easy. And You're not making it any easier! You give us little attention and care more about the middle and upper class. We deserve the same amount of attention as they do. Were not payed enough which means we cant provide ourselves and out family with enough food. You're being greedy with the money and choose not to listen to what we have to say. Our voice is one in the wind and your clearly not intending to listen to us.

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  30. Dear Louis XVI,
    Here living as a peasant, is such a hard thing let me tell you. Going through your a rough time right now is the worst. So much has happened, but one of our biggest struggles is poverty. Being a peasant is hard enough but not giving us the attention we deserve just as much as all the attention you give the middle and upper class, we all are not being paid a lot and whats that gonna do how are we supposed to provide for our selves why don't we deserve it.., but besides from the money unlike the upper and middle class, just as well, how come we don't we have the rights they have what makes us so much different?. Things need to change we are not being listened too.

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  31. Dear Louis XVI,
    This country is in trouble because of you. You've been spending more money and what we the people came to... we are in debt because we are paying increasing taxes.I believe that you should know how to finance. You need to think before you make actions and plan more orderly so we wouldnt have any issues

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  32. Dear Louis XVI,
    Im not sure what your thoughts are about financial stability and funds is, but all i have to say is that your terrible at it, we are in depth and we are suffering from it, it isnt easy for us to live like this and it isnt fair at all, we are paying the price for your poor desitions, give more attention to the lower class of people in YOUR kingdom that You rule, if your going to be a ruler, be a good one, or you will face the consequences.

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  33. Dear Louis XVI,
    I think you should think twice before you make another move because a lot of things that you are doing is affecting the economy. People have to start paying more taxes because that is one way to help the economy. I think before you do another move think twice about how you can help the economy

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  34. Dear Louis XVI,
    I think that the biggest problem right now would be the economy. I is slowly decline and eventually it will fall. Peasants are attack the rich just for food,so they can live. Your taxing it outrageous. You don't deserve to be king. You don't know how to rule properly. why take pity on the people who have nothing, when there are people living like they should be king and queen. Tax them instead of us. You couldn't go a day living our lives. we have families that we need to take care of. Stop spending what we don't need and use it to get ride of our debt then maybe you can get us back on track.

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  35. Dear Louis XVI,
    I'm not sure what your thoughts are about financial stability and funds is, but all i have to say is that your terrible at it, we are in depth and we are suffering from it, it isn't easy for us to live like this and it isn't fair at all, we are paying the price for your poor decisions, give more attention to the lower class of people in YOUR kingdom that You rule, if your going to be a ruler, be a good one. why take pity on the people who have nothing, when there are people living like they should be king and queen. Tax them instead of us. You couldn't go a day living our lives. we have families that we need to take care of. Stop spending what we don't need and use it to get ride of our debt then maybe you can get us back on track.

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  36. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am speaking on behalf of the third estate. I believe that it is highly unfair that we, people who are overworked and underpaid, are REQUIRED to pay taxes, while the people of the first and second estates are not. Why take money from people who barely make a lot of it. Take from the ones who can actually afford to pay your taxes.

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  37. Dear Louis XVI,
    It is not fair that you have been spending more money than the empire has. Because of this, now the people of the 3rd estate have a tax increase on them, and they have to help pay for your actions, while the 1st and 2nd estates don't have to help pay at all. Because of your irresponsible actions. now the people have to suffer, and they are forced to help you pay. If you are going to continue acting with out thinking, you shouldn't rule over the people anymore. Unless you change your ways, and start acting like a more responsible ruler, you should be removed from power.

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  38. Dear Louis XVI,
    It is incredibly unfair that you have been spending more money than the empire has. Because of this, we the people of the 3rd estate have a tax increase, while the 1st and 2nd estates don't have to pay a hire tax, nor help pay at all. All of your irresponsible actions have the people of the 3rd estate have to suffer, and they are forced to help you pay. Unless you start acting like a more "ruler", you should not be in power anymore.

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  39. Dear Louis XVI,
    This third estate shouldn't be existence here's why. I am speaking as the voice of the third estate. I think it's completely unfair that we, the peasants and bourgeoisie, who are already struggling with the money that we have to pay higher taxes just to help with deficit spending than the first and second estate.

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  40. Dear Louis XVI,
    I am a hard working peasant, who lives in your empire. My biggest concern is about the economy. It worries my family and I that we will soon no longer have any money to feed ourselves due to these huge taxes. We barely make any money to begin with, and these taxes are just so unbearable to deal with. I feel that you should lower the taxes to us peasants and make them higher to the people who make an actual profit. This is the most fairest solution that the other peasants and I could come up with. I hope that you take our request into consideration. Thank you.

    Kind regards,
    Paula the Peasant.

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